Week 19 The amazing school tour by Denis

Another school tour – this one was a bit more adventurous than any other school tour. We were going to see the amazing Mona Lisa but as we all know that was too good to be true and we ran out of fuel.

Then there was trouble because we ran out of fuel outside an unpleasant wood so Jayden bellowed then and said, ” Can’t we just explore the woods and that will be way better than looking at a painting.

It was decided that we were going to go in. There were 5 boats and we were told that they belonged to a drug lord. Suddenly after 30 seconds BANG BANG  BANG. Gun shots. Jayden’s idea  wasn’t a great idea after all.

4 thoughts on “Week 19 The amazing school tour by Denis”

  1. Well done Denis! I bet they all wished they had just gone to see the Mona Lisa instead! Great writing, well done.

  2. Hmmm…. Jayden’s idea really wasn’t such a good idea after all! Back to the bus and find cover is the next course of action I would think, Denis! I hope that everyone escapes and gets to see the Mona Lisa. Keep up the good work Denis!

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