Week 23 At The End of the Rainbow By Szymon

Slowly I walked on the pavement, my heart sinking. I wanted to go and buy myself ice cream but I didn’t have the money to buy one as my parents weren’t home. I wanted to get a normal one with red, sweet strawberry sauce on top. I saw my neighbour on a ladder washing his windows but I didn’t say anything. Suddenly I saw a rainbow at the fringe of the forest. I ran as quickly as a cheetah and within two minutes I found myself at the pot of gold. As I was reaching for the coins … I heard rustling in the bushes…

Week 23: Never Will Believe Again By Marc

Sprinting down the pavement I  was going to my best friend.  He’s so funny -every time I see him and it’s like watching a clown falling over. Going there I walked under a mammoth size red ladder. Accidently I dropped a couple of coins on the ground  The isolated house that I never wanted to walk by was where I dropped the coins.

Later on, it was really late so my mam came to collect me. First, she saw the coins on the ground and she thought I got kidnapped as she knew they were mine. She had that sinking feeling. Then she realised  that I was there.

Week 23 Typical Larry By Matthew D

I’m Larry the Leprechaun and I love gold coins. “Yipe,” I cried as I saw a rainbow at the bottom of the valley. And everyone knows at the end of the rainbow there’s a pot of gold. I just have to make sure that my malicious Leprechaun friends won’t beat me to it.

Within five minutes I was where the gold was. I  looked in admiration at the fine specimen of gold coins. I got my red ladder climbed up and grabbed the pot out of the tree. As I was walking on the pavement I saw a little fish in the water and  I peered in to have a better look.

“Oh no”I cried as I dropped all the gold coins into the murky pond.

Week 23 The game By :Tadhg


The coins sank into the water. There was no way of getting them out as the water was too deep and they were already sinking to the bottom. I knew I would never get my new game anyway.

Jungle Journey was too expensive to buy. Suddenly I saw it –  I saw the game just left on the pavement under the red ladder. I rushed towards it and grabbed it and went home to try the new awesome game.

I inserted the disc and grabbed my controller. I clicked into the game. It showed the names. I chose Wolf Stone because the name sounded cool. … Suddenly I wasn’t in my room anymore ..I was in the jungle…

Wek 23, Sinking, By Tim

I was walking on the pavement heading for the ship. On my way I saw a man who fell off a red ladder so I decided to go and help him out. I continued my walk to the harbour. I counted my coins to see if I had enough to buy something from the gift shop on the ship. Luckily I was the first person to get on the boat. I went to my room that was big and opulent. I jumped onto my bed and went straight to sleep.

Suddenly a few days later the ship hit a rock that made a big hole in it and water started pouring in. A few minutes later the ship started sinking. I was terrified so I looked for something I could float on.

30 minutes later.

The ship had completely sunk and I was rescued by the rescue team.

Week 23 Disappointed by Mathew O G

It was Wednesday and Mary asked a man politely to paint her house. Mary told him to surprise her with the colour because she was staying in the Pavement Hotel for the weekend.

The painter said okay with a smug smile on his face. On Saturday the painter came with his red ladder.  She paid him a few coins and he waved Mary good bye. As soon as she turned the corner he left..

When she was coming home excitement  fizzed inside her like a fresh glass of lemonade… But to her disappointment, the house wasn’t even painted.  She was beginning to get that sinking feeling…

Week 23 A Terrible Day in Irish History By Danny

On the 10th of April 1912 the Titanic was just about to set sail. Everyone was waiting for the red rope ladder to come down so that the people could get on.  Poor people were counting their coins to see if they had enough to get on. Other people were standing on the pavement waving at their family saying goodbye.

Four days later news came in and it wasn’t good. The Titanic was just after sinking. Everyone with family on the ship felt a bit queasy and were squirming with sadness yet hopeful they might have survived.

A terrible day in Irish History.

Week 23 The Toy By Ciarán

My friend and I were on our way to the toy shop to buy the brand new red wreaker 2 game. Once we got to the store we got the last copy but we had a sinking feeling because we were a couple of coins short.
So we walked out of the shop empty handed.  I told my friend I would catch up to him later. I kept walking until I came across a ladder and under it were the coins I needed.  But when I reached out to get them I got my hand stuck in the pavement – it was wet cement.

Week 23 Unlucky By Jack

It was a hot spring day and Pat was working on the tiles of a house.  After a while Pat decided to ask the owner of the house he was working on could he have a bottle of water.  The owner said yes and Pat set off to work again.  He climbed up his red ladder onto the roof and started working. Pat thought he forgot to pay the owner for the water so he hopped down off the ladder and ran to the front door and knocked.

” I’m so sorry,” he told the owner as he gave the owner the coins.

” It’s ok,” the owner said, “you didn’t need to pay me.”

“Oh my word -you are sinking into the pavement- I forgot to tell you it had just been set – now it’s ruined.  You are fired!” the owner screamed.

” I’m sorry…” Pat began but before he could finish his apology he was shoved out the door.  Pat just walked away sadly.

Week 22: Miserable Meal By Naglis

“Hello everybody, welcome back to Master Chef!”

“Today we are watching the two competitors Max and Frank trying to make a salad out of just vegetables and a vinegar in twenty minutes!”

Max was extremely worried and he thought this task was insurmountable. Max started by chopping his vegetables neatly. Next he put it all into a bowl and started mixing them together. After a while you could hear one of the judges shout “10 seconds left!”

In the heat of the moment, Max accidentally poured way too much vinegar in. When he handed it to the judge she squirmed as the vinegar was too sharp.

Week 22, Too Strong a Smell, by Mikolaj

I was really bored so I went upstairs and got my phone and played piano tiles 2. My Mom was bored too but she had things to do. She cleaned the sink with the vinegar. I was starting to get hungry and I was in the shop yesterday with my friends and I bought sweets that I left in the fridge. I went down as fast as I could. As soon I was entering the kitchen I smelled the disgusting smell of vinegar. The vinegar was too sharp. I ran back upstairs and got my book to settle me down. My Mom came up to check what did I do and she was confused. I told her to never ever use vinegar again when I am home. She agreed and I lived a happy life.

Week 22: Why By Marc

Cleaning for a long dreary time I had to wash the floor. My mom shouted “make sure to use vinegar for washing the floor.” So I put vinegar in with the blue water but I think I put in too much. The vinegar was too sharp to clean the floor and the cupboards. I started cleaning the cupboards anyway. I started cleaning the cupboard that mom said not to open because it was stuck. Suddenly while I was cleaning the dank cupboard started to open…

“Why was she hiding this from me?”

Week 22 Yuck By Matthew D

“Oh no ” I cried as I saw the nurse come into the ward with a trolley in front of her. We have the same food for every single meal  – fish and chips and the vinegar was too sharp on the chips. It was ridiculous and it didn’t even trouble the nurse.

I thought these people were meant to cure you not poison you. I squirmed as I slowly placed a chip in my mouth. I said to the nurse ” Why are you giving us this horrible food?” Her reply was “Eat it or starve.” so I ate my chips but I didn’t enjoy them.

Week 22, The New Chef, By Tim

Yesterday I went to my favourite restaurant for dinner. When I got there, there was a new chef. I ordered my food but was a little bit nervous because I thought that he wouldn’t cook it right. When my food arrived I got excited to eat it. When I took my first bite the vinegar was too sharp. So I told the waiter that something was wrong with my soup.

The waiter brought the food back to he kitchen. While I was waiting for my food to be fixed I read a newspaper and on the newspaper, I saw the chef. It said that he was a prisoner that had escaped from prison a few days ago. It said he got fired from six restaurants because he would poison customers. I called the police and they came to arrest the chef.

Week 21 New Crisp Flavour Fail By Szymon

It was my first day of work and I had already made a bad impression of myself. I began working at a crisp factory at the fringe of the city. I decided to impress my boss by making a new flavour for crisps. It was pepper and vinegar.
I had made some and ate them with my boss but there was one problem; the vinegar was too sharp. One of the employees who always wanted to be the best had a smug smile on his face. I almost got fired for my idea until my boss decided to sell them in bright eye-catching colours. They were a hit.

Week 22 Trying to impress By Danny

Looking at the jobs page of the paper I felt depressed and weary as I had no job but suddenly I saw a job just for me. It was in a Tayto  factory and they wanted just one person and it said: ” Call this number if you are interested but hurry because it’s only for a short time.”

The next day I went down to the factory and to my relief, no one else was there so they hired me straight away and said: ” I want you to make a new pack of vinegar Taytos  as the vinegar was too sharp in the Salt and Vinegar packet.”

So I said ” yes sir” and started working straight away to make a new flavour  pack of Taytos.

Week 22: The robbery of the year By Sean

There is a competition among the criminals as to who does the most difficult robbery in a year. I was sure I would win.

The king and queen were going to a party so I went to the castle when they left and watched the guards as they walked around.  Then I ran into a vent.  As I was crawling I heard the chief saying the vinegar was too sharp on his lunch.

Then there was a shining light coming from the vault.  As soon as I was over the crown I blew some dust off it to see if there were any lazers protecting it.  Luckily there were no lazers but as soon as I hit the ground there were alarms sounding…

Week 22 The bake off by Mathew og

I entered the local bake-off. I  had arrived in town and I was exhilarated. It was my first time entering and I was quite nervous. The menu was to be chips and we had to make the best homemade chips EVER!

I went to my nana’s house to get her great chip recipe. I got through all the rounds and now it was the final. The room it was held in had bright eye-catching colours and it was bustling with people

I was doing really well until the last few seconds.  As I put the vinegar on the buzzer sounded.

I gave the judge my chips and he said the vinegar was too sharp.

Week22 By:Tadhg The dish

The tension was unbearable.  He had to get the dish done in five minutes. The chips were nearly done so he grabbed the salt and the vinegar. He took the chips out and they looked lovely. He put on the salt and then put on the vinegar.


The menacing opponent hit his shoulder . The vinegar fell. “NO”.

He tried one chip. The vinegar was too sharp. He knew he was going to lose.

“Times up” yelled the judges.

“Tom – you are up first, you put way too much vinegar on your chips, but the burger is exquisite – great job”.

“Jerry your chips are great but your burger is bad –  now we will announce the winner.”

“The winner is …Tom!”

The Cook’s Mistake By Kacper

One beautiful day there was an inspector coming to view the most marvelous and most eloquent restaurant in the town. At 3 o clock, the inspector came and ordered pork chops with chips and vinegar.  When the cook was nearly ready she poured all the vinegar in and gave it to the inspector.

When she tasted it she was in disgust so she said ” the vinegar was too sharp” and when the cook heard that, she started crying. But as the inspector was just about to leave the cook’s best friend , Sarah, she said that she did not mean to put in all of the vinegar so she got some more and this time said ” best meal ever”.

Week 22 Master chef

I was so sure I was going to win, but…

I was going to make some salad but I didn’t bring the right ingredients so I had to use vinegar instead of salt.  I was panicking. I was so sure I was going to win and now I was having second thoughts.

“TIME,”  said one of the judges.  I had to stop. I was doing well so far.  Then they said to me that the vinegar was too sharp.  I was so disappointed!


Week 22 The Roaming Restaurant By Jack

One afternoon I was walking home from school when I noticed something strange –  in place of Mrs.Miller’s cafe, there was a new restaurant. I wondered what had happened but I was too tired from a long day of school to be able to think straight.

When I got home I told my Mam what I saw and asked if we could go there the following day to eat and she agreed.

When we got there at 5 o clock the next day I ordered chips with vinegar. The meal came ten mins later and all I could think in my head while I was eating my chips was that I was never coming back there again as the vinegar was too sharp.

Week 21: Affable Aaron By Naglis

Joyfully, Aaron was walking in town searching for a Valentines Day gift for his one true love. Just around the corner of town he spotted a little shop that he had never seen before. Cautiously he walked into the shop and stared open mouthed. There were teddy bears everywhere!

“She loves teddy bears!” he exclaimed.

Aaron bought a cute little white one with a red ribbon around its neck. As he was so happy he skipped home delightfully. But he dropped it! Later he scurried back to exactly where he had thought he lost it.

But how could it just disappear?..

Week 21 Afraid By Matthew D

“Bye Mom ” called Grace as she went to meet her friends. Grace of course brought her fine teddy with which she took everywhere. Grace lived a short distance from the town so she walked it. As she strolled down the road she saw an eloquent item in a shop across the road so she decided to have a peek in the door. Grace was amazed by the white marble on the necklace and its clear glass chain. After that she noticed that it was way too expensive and left.

Walking on the path Grace saw a man with a black coat and a pale, ghastly face.  She got scared and ran but while she was running she dropped her teddy.

Week 21: Never Again By Marc

I was getting bullied by a group of bullies.They were moking me that I had a teddy bear. They were punching,kicking and calling me names like teddy lover. So I went for a long dreary walk.

Suddenly I saw the group of bullies and they started being aggresive to me. I dropped the teddy bear and ran away. I told my mom once and for all. All the bullies got in trouble. One had picked up the teddy bear when I dropped it. He had said sorry and he admitted that he had a teddy and now we are best friends.

Week 21 By: Tadhg An adventure to remember

Bob the Bear rushed down the road trying not to be seen by humans- his secret was still to be kept . He didn’t want anyone to know he was alive .He accidentally got turned into a teddy bear by a wizard and was trying to get changed back.

Then he saw it-  the big tall wizard tower. It was time to be human again.He ran in and saw the wizard but the wizard was asleep . Bob went to wake him up and the wizard said the spell to turn back abracadabra.


Bob was no longer a bear … but he wasn’t a human either he was a DOG…

Wee 21 Lost From The Teddy’s point of view By Danny

Hi my name is Eddy the Teddy and I live with my owner Lauren. We go everywhere together, to the park, shopping and even out eating when she goes out which isn’t regularly.

She is very affable and very crafty in her own way. I have been with her for three years now. One day when we were shopping in the bustling town I fell out of Lauren’s hand but the sad thing was that she didn’t notice and I was isolated in a town I didn’t know very well. But than god Lauren’s mother noticed and picked me up.

Week 21, The Teddy by Tim

A few days ago I got a teddy for my mom on Valentine’s Day. When I got home I put the bear next to the Roses I had gotten also for my mom. I went to bed because I was exhausted.

In the morning I went to see the bear. I was shocked at what I saw. The bear was gone and there was a note on the counter saying ” I’M COMING FOR YOU”.

I ran upstairs to tell my mom that the bear was alive. At the top of the steps  I could see the bear smiling at me in a creepy way. I grabbed it and I threw out of the window onto the streets. I locked all the windows and doors and ran into my room. I hid under my covers and the bear was there so took it outside and I burned it.