Week 35 Halucination By Szymon

“Good Night” said Gabriela.
She was going to bed after a frustrating and tiring day. She had three tests and tennis practice that lasted an hour. In the middle of the night she started to hallucinate and she went to the house next door.
No one was in the house because the owners went to a party. They forgot to close the door so she got in easily and accidently took a necklace that was worth thousands. The next day she saw the police and saw that she was holding a necklace. She realised that it was the neighbours however she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35 The door was open By Danny

One day I was in the park playing hide and seek with my two friends Tara and John. Tara was on and she was looking for me and John but she couldn’t find us. So she went to the house next to the park.

She looked all around the house but she couldn’t find us. Suddenly she heard the door of the house open but no one went in or out. She looked in  the open door but she couldn’t see anyone, all she could see was the wallet of the man who lived there and she got it and ran away-  however, she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35 Professional golfer by CONOR

When this 4-year-old girl was driving in her dad’s van to a golf tournament she asked him ‘what’s golf? Daddy’ Her dad answered ‘ So you get a ball and hit it with a golf club’ “I like golf ” she said. At the tournament, it seemed like she really knew how to play it.

About 15 years later she had become a Pro golfer. However, she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35 The hero by Dylan.

Bang! They heard a massive bang in the 3rd class.

The Titanic was sinking.

She was so scared. She woke up her two children and got them dressed and ran to safety. They could hear cries and screams as the Titanic broke in half.

She remembered her mother’s last words ” keep the children safe “.


They rushed to the lifeboats only to find they were on the other side. The two sides were separated and had to jump to the other side. She was only able to save her children.

However, she couldn’t believe what she had done. She died a hero.





Week 35: Ultra Bomb By Sean

The ultra bomb team is the best-trained team in the world. There is a girl on the team and she is the best one. And her name is Jane.

Jane, we need you in the office -there is a bomb at the White House and there are men with guns there –  so leave that to us.  You go now with your team and defuse that bomb.

2 hours later they were there and John was after knocking down the door and they are shouting at the men. But there was a problem there-there were only green wires. Jane just cut one and luckily the bomb stopped at the last second. However, she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35 The bomb by Mathew O G

Beep…beep..beep went the timer on the bomb…

Some bystanders ran past the crowd and bent down next to the bomb  -the timer was set for 72 hours. One of the bystanders reported it to the police.

They thanked him gracefully. They got a professional bomb defuser. She arrived the next day her name was Anna Scott. She was just out of boot camp. She cut open the bomb. She had to cut the red wire or the blue wire but was unsure…

She cut the red one and it halved the time on the bomb… However she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35:Tennis by Liam A

One sunny day a girl called Mary was playing tennis with her brother Jake. They loved tennis. Then the next day Mary decided to go play with the tennis club. When the people who were watching Mary play they were shocked at how good she was.  They wanted her on the team.

Then 15 years later she got a scholarship to play with America – she was amazed she was so happy. Now she will be playing in the Australian open however she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Game after game she nearly won every game she played and every set. She was unstoppable. She was amazing.

Week 35 The race by Colin

It was the final of the ladies two hundred m sprint. 8 world class sprinters ready in the blocks. Complete silence until the gun went off.

BANG. Everyone catapulted their strides longer. Suddenly someone tripped over and grazed her knee. For the last hundred metres, everyone was sprinting like a cheetah running for prey. It came to the last bend then straight –  the race was really on now.

The crowd was roaring as the race finished. the winner, however, couldn’t believe what she had done. A gold medal for Ireland. the Irish roared loudly.

Week 35 The Washing Machine by Maciej

Mom ! Shouted Laura , where are you going ?

I am going to work.

Laura can you put on the washing machine later.

Yes Laura answered .

Then mom went to work. After mom went to work she put on the television for 15 minutes and went to put the washing machine. Suddenly she heard her favourite program so she put in too much of the powder.

After 1 hour she went to put the clothes out. But when she opened it – BANG!!! everything burst out. The floor was all wet . However, she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35 : Mistake by Oisin

At home a girl got her clothes dirty and decided to wash them. She put in her clothes and then by accident got shampoo instead of washing up liquid and put it in the wrong container. She hit the On button and left it.

Two hours later there were bubbles everywhere however she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Well time to get cleaning!  Mom came home and she said she was dirty so she went to have a bath but all the shampoo was gone.  I was in big trouble not to mention what my dad would be like –  he would probably lock me in my room for a month.

Week 35 Crisis by Jack

“What happened?” he said to another guard.

“I don’t know,” he said “but I think someone’s after breaking out of Alcatraz…”

It was a lovely summer morning …well not really because she was in jail.

“Hey Rudy,” she said.

“What’s up?… actually Laura, come here.”

“What is it Rudy? said Laura.

“There is word going around that Spike has a plan to break out tonight,” said Rudy. “But he is obviously going to get caught so when he breaks out and all the guards go running after him…  I’m getting out of here.”

“I’m going with you,” said Laura.

“Well it’s settled then -we’re getting out tonight.”

The night came and Rudy and Laura broke out.  Rudy used his sleeping pills to put the crocodiles to sleep they both used their bed sheets to make a rope to get over the wall but they were halfway up the wall when Laura said “Rudy I don’t think I can do this.”

“YES you can,” said Rudy.

“Ok  I’ll try.

They got over the wall and they swam to shore however she could not believe what she had done.


Week 35 The running race by Aidan

The four contenders jogged to the starting line – Katie ,Tom , Charlie and Alex. There was a sound of a horn and everybody ran off. Katie was in the lead straight away until Tom caught up and passed her out.  Alex was way behind and Charlie started so fast he tripped and he was taken away.

Katie and Tom were tying. Suddenly Katie tripped and Alex and Tom zoomed past her. Katie was hurt but she kept on going. Katie didn’t win but she did cross the finish line. The crowds went wild-  however, she couldn’t believe what she had just done.

Week 35 Prison again by Ciaran

Melissa was in Alcatraz prison. She had been trying to escape for 7 years.
Day after day she was thinking of a plan to get out. Then one day she looked at the courtyard wall with a menacing look and had a plan… but she needed some items to escape –  a rope, wooden planks, strength, and bravery.
First she pulled the bar on the window-  it broke after a while. T and hen she jumped into the sea she swam to shore. She made a small little raft however she couldn’t believe what she had done… she had escaped or had she…

Week 35 The Sinking of The Titanic by Ronan

There was a girl on the Titanic looking for a  better life for her family. She had never been to America but she was sure it would be better than Ireland at the time. Being a third class passenger was better than being no passenger…She had thought.

One night just about thirteen miles off the coast of America her mom was feeling very sick and was sure to die soon. She was about to die because she was not being taken care of properly and that was all her fault. However she could not believe what she had done. Suddenly she heard a crash and the scrape. She woke the family and got them dressed. She knew the boat would sink

Week 35, First day of High school by Tim

It was Penny’s first day in Elmore Jr High and she was very nervous about it so her parents told her to not be nervous. The next day Penny’s mom Nicole dropped her to school.
Her mom told her “Have a great day” Penny replied, “Love you Mom.”
Penny walked up to the door and she took a deep breath and said to herself ” You can do this”. She opened the door and then everyone stared at her. She walked down the hallway and she was scared because she heard that there was a bully named Olivia Jones in her class.
As Penny walked she saw Olivia. Olivia went up to Penny and pushed her. Penny punched Olivia and everyone looked at her however she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35: Trembling ,by Dan

Mary was terrified. The German machine guns seemed to be getting closer every day.

Suddenly Mary was called out to help a wounded soldier. She ran across No man’s land with her head down. Her side was roaring at her to not do it, but she was determined.

Amazingly everyone stopped firing bullets. Mary hurled the soldier on her back and scuttled to the trenches. When she got back everyone thanked her for saving their friend , however , she couldn’t believe what she had done.

When she returned home after the war she was awarded the  VICTORIA CROSS  [V C ]  for saving the life of another person.


Week 35: The Big Test By Marc

The year test was coming up and Hannah only goes to school on Wednesdays and Fridays. So that means that she would get a low score. Today was the big day and Hannah was really nervous. She was thinking- oh no I’m going to get a bad score.

If she gets under 80% she would have to do chores until she moves out. The good side is that if she gets 100% she will never do chores again.

So what she did was sit next to the smartest kid and copy her work. The smartest kid forgot an answer and Hannah got it. She got a 100% and the smartest kid got 99%. However, she couldn’t believe what she had done.

Week 35 The Wonderful Day By: Mikolaj

It was the day when my mom was in the Olympic run for the gold medal. The run was starting. 

On your marks, get set, GO!

…and they all ran. There were six runners and they had to run a mile. My Mom was second until she knew that the end-line was near so she sprinted to the finish and she won!

However, she couldn’t believe what she had done. She came home with the lovely gold medal. We all cheered for the rest of the day. Now we all know that my Mom is the best runner in the world. 

Week 35: Has She Gone Bonkers? By Naglis

“Ding Dong”.

Nobody answered. Cautiously and slowly she opened the door which was half off its hinges. It was dark and the smell was of damp and decay. She saw a wallet full of money inside it. Quickly she snatched the man’s wallet and darted home. She hid the wallet. However, she could not believe what she had done.

The next morning she heard a knock on the door. It was a policeman.

“Have you seen anyone entering that dark house and coming out with a wallet?”

“Sadly not no sir” she answered. 

What will she do now?  Will she own up?…or will she not..?

Week 35 Cork City Sports By Wojciech

One bright day a girl named Kate was in school. Her teacher Mrs Emma said that they were going to the gym. It was the qualifiers to Cork City Sports. Luckily she had qualified for the race and the relay as well.
A few weeks later it was the day of Cork City Sports.  When she arrived there with her friends they started to run. She came 2nd in the race. Next the relay – they came first however, she couldn’t believe what she had done.
When they came back to school she showed everyone the trophies she got.  She was really happy. Then she showed her mum. Mum was very proud of what she did.

Week 35 Friends By Matthew D

She was just gone in the school door and her arch enemy Ava had given her a kick. She really hated Ava – every day her and Ava would be bickering. Then one day at break she hit Ava. Ava was on the ground crying, however, she couldn’t believe what she had done.

She told the teacher what happened she got an ice pack for Ava. Now she and Ava were actually becoming friends. And by the end of the week, her and Ava were best friends.