The Best Day Ever By Joe

Finally, school is over and I’m so excited to go to the zoo. I asked mum if my best friend Greg could come and she said he could. When we got to the zoo the first thing that we wanted to do was to go to the sea animal section. I love seahorses and when we saw them we were in love. I learned loads of new things for example – people would kill an elephant for their bones and tusks.

For lunch I had avocado on toast with a side of purple grapes. My day got even better when mum agreed to let Greg stay for a sleepover. We both agreed that it was one of the best days ever.

One thought on “The Best Day Ever By Joe”

  1. Hi Joe
    Loved the story and the punctuation.

    I love seahorses too especially red ones!
    Goodbye for now

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