Week 1 by Naglis

Nervously I took my first step into the eerie hazardous house at the end of the street. The smell was of damp and decay. I could see a dozen of the doors half off their hinges. Sweat dripping off my head feeling terrified I didn’t know what to do. Tiptoeing across the dark ghastly hallway I was as pale as snow. I felt a little safer because I had a flashlight. Moments later my batteries ran out.

What would I do now?

In the distance, I saw a rope which I thought was a light. Without thinking I pulled it. I looked up and  I saw a sandbag falling at me as fast as a bullet…and the rest is history. 

One thought on “Week 1 by Naglis”

  1. Well done Naglis.
    I loved how you didn’t really tell us what exactly was going on. It keeps the reader guessing.
    Nimble as you are – I’d be surprised if you didn’t manage to dodge that sandbag.

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