Week 1: Halloween Horror by Dylan.

It was Halloween night. Liam,  Conor and I were trick or treating in what they called the haunted neighborhood. We were fine until we reached the haunted mansion. I knocked on the door.

“So,I wonder what lies ahead of us,” said Liam.

Suddenly the doors creaked open. We slowly stepped in. Immediately the doors slammed shut. They were locked. We then heard a scream that would break glass.

“Let’s go explore,” said Liam. “Are you crazy!” I screamed.

13 thoughts on “Week 1: Halloween Horror by Dylan.”

  1. Super work Dylan.
    I find it very hard to understand these people like Liam who love exploring the unknown…
    I think he’s crazy!
    Well done on completing your first 100-word challenge.

  2. Hi Dylan. I agree. I think Liam WAS crazy. No way would you see me exploring any haunted mansions… and there are a lot of them around at Halloween. I really like how you described the scream that ‘would break glass’. Well done Dylan.

  3. Dear Dylan,
    I love your story but I will give you advice. Always check your story again in case there’s a mistake.

    From,Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class 17/18

  4. I like how liam and Conor were at a haunted mansion to trick or treat and when the kids got freighted and ran away .
    Great story hope you make fanstaic story’s like this.
    By Collins.

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