Week 1: The cement By: Tadhg

“Splash ”

Tom crashed into the cement head first.

“Help me!” Tom yelled,” I’m too young to die .”

He started screaming like a lunatic so I had to help him . I walked over to him and gave him a rope. He grabbed it but before he got out I took a photo of him. Then I helped him out of the cement .

“What was that for?” He yelled. “Why did you push me into the cement?” Tom roared.

“I told you to move out of the way,” I answered.

As Tom went away and I checked my phone –  the picture was going viral –  already 1,000 views…

3 thoughts on “Week 1: The cement By: Tadhg”

  1. Hi Tadhg
    Really like the way you took a picture before helping Tom
    One question how did the photo get 1,000 views in a second
    Goodbye from Tim

  2. Hi Tadhg,
    I like the way you took a picture of him before helping him,
    It reminds me of a television show I watched when I was young,
    I wonder how much views it had after a week,
    Goodbye from Szymon.

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