Week 10: Brilliant Burglary By Naglis

One dark night Stealing Spike and Thief Tom decided to look for treasure. By the way they are pirates. Stepping into their ship Spike headed for the steering wheel while Tom looked around. Suddenly Tom spotted a Jolly Rodgers flag. They headed straight towards it. Tom put on his armour. Later on Spike put on his armour.

They hopped on to the other ship. Nobody was there. To their surprise they saw a gargantuan pot of gold. Their hearts nearly popped out of excitement. Straight away they took the gold and took it home. Just as they were brushing their teeth they heard sirens howling outside.

“Wait but where are we going to hide it all?”

2 thoughts on “Week 10: Brilliant Burglary By Naglis”

  1. Hi Naglis,

    You’ve used some really impressive writing techniques in your story! You use speech and alliteration well and I particularly like your use of the word “gargantuan”- very unique! I’m curious to know where they will hide all the gold and if they manage to get away with their theft.

    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

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