Week 10 The Diamond by Ronan

One day my friend John and I came in from the yard at school and our ghastly teacher announced that we would be going on a trip to the museum. we got extremely excited.

When we got to the museum the first thing we saw was the world’s largest diamond. The school bully coerced us into smashing the glass around it with the emergency hammer. I said to him but there was a menacing guard protecting it. “Go over and do it or I will beat you up when we get back to school,” he said. So we crept past the guard and got the hammer and smashed the glass. We caused enormous pandemonium. Glass everywhere. John said to me “but where will we hide it all?”

3 thoughts on “Week 10 The Diamond by Ronan”

  1. I love your story this week – Well done Ronan!
    It’s great to see all the WOW words you’ve used. They really add to your story.
    With all the pandemonium that’s around, I don’t think you’ll be able to get away with it!
    Super work!

  2. Hi Ronan, I like that you did something that would actually happen, well the you in the story. Hope you get showcased.

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