It was pandemonium. Some buffoon bombarded my house with numerous fireworks and now it was on fire ! The menacing red and orange flames demolished everything in sight.
I woke up first to an avalanche of flames consuming my room. I covered my mouth and dashed to my parents room and pounced on their bed to wake them up. When they were awake I ran to my sister’s room to wake her up.
The fire brigade was alerted to the scene by our neighbours .We all escaped through my bedroom window and the fire brigade saved our dog.
Sadly our house was consumed by the vast amount of flames.
I liked the part of the story when you said I woke up and there was a avalanche of flames.
Well done that story was so good I like how you used there was a fire in my house when I woke up.
Hi Dylan,
I really like your story,
I might say this every week but really you are going to be an author,
I am sad the house went down in flames.
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