We were planning a robbery. My friend Bill and I. I was in a quandary whether we would hang around the vicinity of the bank for a while and then make a pounce or if we would just dive straight in. The plan was that I would be the getaway driver in the old rust red pickup truck and Bill would go in and use a crowbar to pull open the main safe. The day of the robbery didn’t start well. At around 6 o clock I went to pick up Bill. He broke his finger by catching it in the door of the pick up.
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Hi Ronan! I really liked your story! I liked how detailed you were with the steps of the robbery. One thing I would fix is punctuation, but otherwise cool story! Try to write back, okay? From Gretchen in Illinois (P.S. Here’s the link!
https://kidblog.org/class/rays-am-1920-rockstars/posts/69sg29qmh2v1q98k3c9wy7ejp)
Cool story I really liked it.
I thought it could even get a showcase.
Leon.