I ran up the airport escalator. My gun in my righthand. The men in front of me were panting at this stage and were slowing. I took out my phone and rang for back up. One man turned right and the other left. I turned left into a café. A man was at the counter. “No” he said, ” I like marmite”.
“Get on the ground,” I bellowed as he put the money on the counter. Suddenly I heard footsteps and 25 FBI agents swarmed the café. The man that had gone right was on the ground in handcuffs. I looked back to see the other criminal be hauled out from behind the counter.
Hi Colin,
I like your story this week ,
I like the way you used the prompt this week
Where did you get the idea from
Keep up the good work
From Niamh
Hi Colin,
I like your story this week ,
I like the way you used the prompt this week
Where did you get the idea from
Keep up the good work
From Niamh
Hi Colin,
I like your story this week ,
I like the way you used the prompt this week
Where did you get the idea from
Keep up the good work
From Niamh
An action packed piece Colin thank you. I find myself wondering what your protagonist might have been asked to elicit his marmite response. Perhaps it was, “would you like Vegemite with cheese on your toasted sandwich?”
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Plymouth
New Zealand