Week 11:The Tree By: Tadhg

“Tom, come on -we have to get to the park quickly.  The band is just starting to sing. We can’t miss Bts’s first song.”

“We’re not going to watch them sing – we’re going too screw up their songs and make them look stupid.”

“But I thought we were going to follow that suspicious looking guy over there . ”

“Wait –  what are you talking about?”

“There is a weird guy walking into the forest beside your house . ”

“Then let’s follow him and find out what he’s doing .”

“Where is he gone? and why is there a bike in the tree over there?”

“Let’s go and look at it . Wait there’s a door.  Let’s go in …”

2 thoughts on “Week 11:The Tree By: Tadhg”

  1. You’ve written a very mysterious piece this week Tadhg and I’d love to know what exactly is going on.
    Just one bit of advice – try not to use too much dialogue.
    Good work.

  2. Ooh, Tadhg, now you’ve left me in a state of suspense. I’m wondering what the bike was doing in the tree and what they are going to find behind the door. I’m thinking that it’s not going to be good though.
    Please don’t follow him, fellas!
    From Michelle, Melbourne, Australia

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