Week 14: The annoying monkey by Conor


Every day when I wake up I always ask my mom if I can get a pet monkey.She is getting tired of me always asking her so she finally says yes.

So we get in the  car and drive to the pet store. At the pet store we see lots of monkeys causing pandemonium. We buy a monkey and bring it home. When we got home I wanted to do some writing on my computer but the monkey wants a go too so I let him have a go but he pushes it off the table!

3 thoughts on “Week 14: The annoying monkey by Conor”

  1. Hi Conor,

    I enjoyed reading your story. I really like your use of the present tense – makes the story seem as if you are telling me face to face. I’m not sure I would keep that monkey as a pet!

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