Week 12: The Elephant Raid By Liam O

It was the beginning of my violin lessons…

I was next to play the violin and I heard a thud in the hall of the school where the lessons were on. I thought nothing of it kept on playing the violin.

Suddenly a HUGE Purple Elephant busted down the wall and let out a roar. We all screeched and ran to the corner. Loads of police were running into the room.

The police used a rope and threw it over the Purple Elephant. The Elephant then kicked at the police and it ran away while the police were shooting tranquilizer guns.  They all missed and the Elephant got away…


One thought on “Week 12: The Elephant Raid By Liam O”

  1. Hi Liam,
    I really like your story this week! You did a great job of describing the scene. I’m glad that the elephant got away, and I hope he has lots of adventures.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

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