Week 12: The Elephant Raid By Liam O

It was the beginning of my violin lessons…

I was next to play the violin and I heard a thud in the hall of the school where the lessons were on. I thought nothing of it kept on playing the violin.

Suddenly a HUGE Purple Elephant busted down the wall and let out a roar. We all screeched and ran to the corner. Loads of police were running into the room.

The police used a rope and threw it over the Purple Elephant. The Elephant then kicked at the police and it ran away while the police were shooting tranquilizer guns.¬† They all missed and the Elephant got away…


One thought on “Week 12: The Elephant Raid By Liam O”

  1. Hi Liam,
    I really like your story this week! You did a great job of describing the scene. I’m glad that the elephant got away, and I hope he has lots of adventures.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

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