Week 12 The unknown tribe by Laurynas


Blood everywhere, people dressed in animal skins cheering, our explorers getting killed and I’m stuck in a cage.

The people were an unknown tribe living on an island called Hudo. They sacrificed people for their imaginary god called Vudu. They would cut off their enemy’s head and legs but this was no joke everything was real. They took everything seriously and had no jokes.

The god Vudu was a cup but no ordinary cup. It had funny patterns on its side and it had an angry face. There were legs sticking out at its head.

Suddenly the cage banged and a man walked in and dragged me out. He murmured something under his breath and placed me on a stone. …This was the end of my life.



16 thoughts on “Week 12 The unknown tribe by Laurynas”

  1. Hi Lauraynus
    I loved your story it reminded me
    of the movie lost tribes you should watch it
    Ewan 5th

  2. Hey laurynas good story and well done for being showcased this week. I would not have liked to be in that mug. Gary 6th.

  3. Hi Laurynas.
    I liked your story because it reminds of a YouTube video that a person kicked his own dog
    I wouldn’t do that to any animal.
    What type of animal were you?

  4. Hi Laurynas,
    I loved your story.
    I wonder if the tribe killed you or if you somehow managed to escape.
    Keep up the good work.-Kayden

  5. Well done Laurynas.
    Congratulations on being showcased.
    Was he actually killed or did they spare his life?
    Will you ever do a part two?
    Well done.
    David 5th.

  6. Hi laurynas Amazing story !
    I loved how you seted it in an fictional island called hudu
    I wonder was vudu a nice god ?
    Why were you kept until last ?
    Keep up the fantastic work Bye Shane F

  7. Hi Laurnas I liked your story.
    I wonder what the guy said under his breath?
    This reminds me of a book I read at home.
    Well done on being showcased.
    Adam (PS can you read my story’s) 🙂

  8. Hi Laurynas.
    Super story.
    You made it unusual but very well written.
    I hope you escape.
    By Bryan

  9. Hi Laurynas.
    Great story you wrote this week.
    I like all of those fake names.
    The end of a life never sounds pleasing.
    Keep up the good work.
    Shane C 5th.
    (P.S please visit my blog)

  10. Hi Lauraynas.
    I liked your story because of aspect with the cup at the end not at front.
    Good Job for a showcase.
    Who was that man which helped you and then killed you because I don’t get it.

  11. Hi Laurynas
    Your story is so scary and weird.
    That tribe sounds mystery.
    I hope you survived from being sacrificed.
    Yours sincerely

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