Week 13: The Best Christmas Ever: By Liam A

It was Christmas Eve and I couldn’t wait to get my presents in the morning. When I was asleep in my bed suddenly I heard a roar from some type of animal. I looked out the window and saw deer eating the grass in my garden. I ran down the stairs as fast as I could and put on my jacket and shoes. I grabbed the oats and ran over to the deer in the garden. I gave each deer a handful of oats but suddenly there was a shout and the deer flew  away. I didn’t realise they could fly.

2 thoughts on “Week 13: The Best Christmas Ever: By Liam A”

  1. Hi Liam A,

    I really liked your story as soon as I read it was Christmas Eve I was really intrigued to read the story.
    Keep up the great work.

    Jessica H
    Ms Brennocks class

  2. Hi Liam, What a great ending to your story. I love the Christmas theme. You worked the prompt in very well. Keep up the good work.
    Mrs O’ Sullivan.

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