Week 13 The Caterpillar By Evan

My name is Jake and I am 5 years old. I am on holidays in America. One day we were in a forest and we found a dainty caterpillar. My parents said we could keep it while on holidays. So we took it home and gave it some delicate food.  We let outside for a hour then we had to go home so I put it in a bottle and put some food in there. And so off we went – once we got home I snuck it out into the back garden and suddenly it evolved. I didn’t realise they could fly.

One thought on “Week 13 The Caterpillar By Evan”

  1. Such an amazing thing that something that crawls around on so many tiny legs eventually turns into an insect with six legs that can fly isn’t it Evan!
    I really like that you gave your character a name. That makes such a difference in drawing me as a reader into the story.
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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