As the prison guard stomped his feet on the damp narrow hallway James and Tom were contemplating their master plan for escape.
Suddenly James gasped with exhilaration,” I have it” he shouted out.
As he was explaining it to Tom, he beamed with joy.
“You’re a genius” Tom whispered.
James was as proud as a peacock.
At approximately 2 am the escape was underway. They successfully escaped but five seconds later the alarm was raised.
“Run” shouted Tom the cold, audible in his voice. As they ran they saw the guards flashlight reflecting off the water. They wanted to dive into the cornfield but they were exhausted.
Hi Mathew,
I love your story
I like the way you used the prompt this week
Keep up the good work
from Nimh
I really like your story It builds up excitement and a lot of questions.
I really think your story should be the GEM OF THE WEEK.
Keep up the good work.
From Leon.
Hi Mathew,
I think your story was great and hopefully you win a special showcase and a cartoon to go with it!
liked your story keep up the good work