Week 14 The Strange Painting by Ciarán

It was a cold night and I was thinking what to give to my secret Santa…  then it came to me I was going to give them the best painting I could find. It was amazing there was only one painting left in there was a bauble,present,Holly and a very strange eye. Suddenly I though it blinked or I did not get enough sleep last night. I walking home until I heard a voice it said bring it back or death and it just got louder and louder and louder so i ran then found myself lost in a forest nobody to help me I was hopeless…

3 thoughts on “Week 14 The Strange Painting by Ciarán”

  1. Hi Mrs, Boyce’s class ,
    Happy New Year and may God bless you.

    From Fortune In Mr.Russell’s class (last year)

  2. It was very interesting read, but there was some grammar and capitalization mistakes.
    If you just correct those simple mistakes, it will be much better!
    – Your Pal, Dylan.

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