Week 15 Lazy Cousin, By Mikolaj

It was the first day of school and my cousin didn’t want to wake up. He was used to waking up at 10:15 am but this day he had to wake up at 5 am. It was 5:15 am and he still wasn’t awake.

I ran into his room and turned the light on. Eventually,  bamboozled he woke up but he told me that the light blinded him. He said to never do that again so I guess I won’t do it. Eventually, he got to school and he was ok. I still don’t know what was wrong with turning the light on if he was supposed to be going to school.

3 thoughts on “Week 15 Lazy Cousin, By Mikolaj”

  1. Good writing, Mikolaj. Getting up early is hard for teachers, too, and your entry gave me a chuckle!

  2. Hello Mikolaj, it is a shock when you have to go back to school after the holidays if you have been sleeping in. I really like the way you set up the two characters in this story. I really warmed to the narrator who was trying to do the right thing for her cousin. I loved the response “so I guess I won’t do it” (turn the light on to wake up the cousin) it just makes the narrator look like such an obliging person. Well done.

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