Week 15 Run or Die By Matthew D

Lucas strolled casually into the bank. He entered the manager’s office with a smirk on his face. Suddenly the room was filled with an ear piercing alarm. The security rushed to the basement. But by the time they reached it, the money was gone Lucas had obviously taken the money.

Lucas walked out the door a bit big headed. The light blinded him and he collapsed onto the floor –  he had twisted his ankle. He heard the dogs coming in and in desperation, he shuffled his way across the floor but it was too late …the dogs had him.

3 thoughts on “Week 15 Run or Die By Matthew D”

  1. Hello Matthew, you start your story really well, gently leading your reader in and building the tension and action as you go, then you resolve the story at the end with Lucas being caught. Well done.

  2. Well done on your story this week Matthew. I like some of the details that you have included in your story, especially they smirk on Lucas’ face. I think he was a bit smug!
    Great writing this week.
    Ms Brennock

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