Week 16 : A bad day By Oisin

Can you believe it?

I came into school in pink pajamas today. Then someone fired a toy gun at me.  After that, some other person blew bubbles into my face and my bicycle fell on the ground. I felt really empty inside.

I wonder what is coming next? (to harm me)

Well here’s a list:  I fell down the stairs, When I was on my sister’s trampoline I stepped in dog poo, I lost my pencil and I forgot to do my homework.

Everything was going wrong. I still have bruises from being on my sister’s trampoline.

This is honestly the worst day ever.

4 thoughts on “Week 16 : A bad day By Oisin”

  1. Oh dear! That is definitely a bad day! I don’t think it could have been much worse!
    Well done Oisin.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin
    Ireland

  2. Hi! I really enjoyed this story it was very interesting I like how you started of the challenge saying (can you believe it) it made me question what was happening next and I wanted to keep on reading your story I hope I see you writing in the future I will be interested to read it!🙂

  3. I like your story but in some parts, it’s random like when it started it just kind of came out of nowhere.

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