Week 16, A Great Day, By Tim

Dear Diary,

Yesterday was my little sister’s 6th Birthday. She was so happy and she got a lot of presents. Her first present was a small pink bicycle then she got a toy gun that shoots bubbles.

The gun was empty so I filled it up with water and soap. We both went to play in the back garden. She fired her gun and bubbles flew around us and then she shot me.

Later we had McDonald’s and Domino’s Pizza. After that we went back home and had the big, triple chocolate fudge cake Mom had baked, it was delicious. We got tired and we both fell asleep.

4 thoughts on “Week 16, A Great Day, By Tim”

  1. Hi Tim. Thanks for sharing your excellent writing around those difficult prompt words. Great sentences and paragraphing.
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand

  2. Well done Tim. You’ve done a great job including all the prompt words. That cake sounds delicious. I can’t get the image of it out my head…..
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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