Week 16 A stray dog By Adam

One day my friend and I were in town walking when we saw a furry dog tied on a leash. We went over to rub the dog when suddenly a vehicle slowly drove past with really loud music blaring. We stayed by the dog for a while but no one came to get the get the dog. We untied it and took it home.

A few hours later there was a knock at the door and when we opened it people were looking for a missing dog that looked exactly like the one we took  They came in and took the dog back and we were sad. Mom said we could just get another one and so we did.

4 thoughts on “Week 16 A stray dog By Adam”

  1. Hi Adam,
    Well done on your story this week. I like how you turned it into a happy ending, I thought it was going to be a sad one.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    100 w/c
    Dublin

  2. Adam,
    Even though the story characters were disappointed about ‘losing’ the ‘found’ dog, I was glad they did the right thing and returned him to his rightful owners. It makes me wonder, though, “Why had they left him alone in the first place?”
    You did a good job incorporating the focus words into your piece. That is not an easy feat.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  3. Hi Adam,
    I really liked your story.
    I liked the way you involved the prompt.
    And the way you used the dog.
    From Charlie.

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