This was the best day of my life. First of all, I woke up to the chiming of my grandfather clock. Before midday, I cycled to my best friend’s house. We played with lego at his house. We also played his x-box one. Arond three o clock my family and I had a flavoursome, scrumptious and appetizing dinner.
Then we went to the zoo. I saw menacing lions, monkeys making buffoons of themselves and baboons up to their usual skullduggery. I dashed over to see a red mamba snake. It looked very scary and aggressive. After that we went home and ate supper.
Hi szymon
I like your story beacause its interesting.
And I like the part of the story when red mamba snake. It looked very scary and aggressive. After that we went home and ate supper.
Hi Szymon
This sounds like a perfect day, it made me wonder if it was a birthday as there were so many great events all happening at once!
I must congratulate on the word ‘skulduggery’, it’s one of the brilliant words that is just not used often enough.
Miss T
Stockbridge, Hampshire
Hi Szymon,
I like the part when you said “This is the best day of my life” because it reminds me of a song called The Best Of My Life and I hope you write more stories. Please comment on my story at https://mrrussell.100wc.net/WK17:-The-Toy-Snake/
From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class