Week 16: Was it enough? By Aivaras

Suddenly it crashed. It was sinking fast and already two floors were flooding. It wouldn’t have happened if the person getting the messages actually listened to them. They thought the ship was unsinkable.

They were now launching safety boats. I was with Jack until it started to split in two. We waited ’til it went into the water.I found a board but it was too heavy for both of us. After a few minutes Jack died from the cold.

I found a whistle and with all my strength I blew it. But was it enough to make them hear it?

2 thoughts on “Week 16: Was it enough? By Aivaras”

  1. Another fantastic heart wrenching story Aivaras. Well done! Historical Fiction seems to be what you love and write best at. I hope someone hears you!

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