Week 17 The Abandoned Bike By Joe

It was my best friend Dylan’s birthday party and I didn’t know what to get him. Mother says I should give him some money but I wanted to be creative about it.

I was trying to prolong the time before Dylan’s birthday started so I could think of something to get him. I told him that I would get him something he would really like and that got him really excited .

It was 2:00pm and I started to walk up to Dylan’s house in disappointment. Just before I went to cross the road I saw an old bike that looked like it had been there for ages. I soon then had an idea on what to get Dylan.

3 thoughts on “Week 17 The Abandoned Bike By Joe”

  1. I think we’ve all faced this at one time or another Joe. Making the right choice when looking for a present for a friend or relative is always a tough one. Although you left your readers without a specific answer, perhaps instead you encouraged us to better use our imaginations when we’re faced with the same problem.
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

  2. Hi Joe,
    I really like your story this week I like the way you used the prompt
    It reminds me of when me and my friends didn’t know what to get one of are friends so two of use gave her money and I didn’t give her money I gave her art stuff.
    Where did you get this idea from? I would of never thought of this idea
    From Niamh

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