Week 17 The cruise by Ciarán

I was so excited – my dad bought me tickets to go on a cruise ship called Lani.  She is the most expensive cruise ship in the world.

Once I got on the ship I had a sense of foreboding. Half an hour into our journey…ZAP… all the lights went off.  The captain started getting people to go to the life boats in a hurry.

I didn’t know what was going on so I followed my parents. I could not hear myself think . Everyone was screaming.

Bang.. I woke up in a hospital . There was no sign of the ship. My parents and others are still wondering …but how could she just disappear. 😑

2 thoughts on “Week 17 The cruise by Ciarán”

  1. Hi Ciarán,
    I like your story this week
    I like the way you used the prompt this week
    Keep the good work

    From Niamh and Abby

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