Week 17 The Stolen Bike By Evan

One day I was going downtown. Suddenly I saw a golden BMX. I did not have a lot of money so if I could sell it  It would be perfect. So I boldly grabbed the bike and got on it.  I took my time and then I looked around and saw a guy with golden chains on him. He roarer ” give me my bike back.” I went as swiftly as I could but I saw him with a phone in his hand and  I knew he was calling the cops. I ran but an hour later I got caught.

3 thoughts on “Week 17 The Stolen Bike By Evan”

  1. Hi Evan
    Your 100WC is fabulous. You used the prompt in a really natural way. I especially liked the descriptive words you used. They added greatly to the work. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

  2. Hi Evan,
    I liked your story.
    I like the way you implemented the prompt.
    What happened after you were caught?
    It reminded me of the BMX I used to have.

  3. Hi Evan,
    The man in the golden chains sounds scary but I suppose if you steal things, people tend to get angry! I wonder how the cops tracked you down?
    Well done. Mrs O’ Sullivan.

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