Week 18: He is sorry By Marc

“Let them go!”

Everybody was shouting. Some people were being held hostage in the Sydney Opera House. About a day later the aggressive, menacing man was arrested. While we were in court he was very cantankerous. So I decided to make a strong, ferocious army to protect our Sydney Opera House.

Everybody was laughing at me – calling me stupid. I was the only one to contemplate about protecting the Sydney Opera house. Sometime later people were being held hostage again in the Sydney Opera House. But this time the man was abominable and was mammoth in size. My army came in and arrested him. Suddenly the crowd started calling me the champion.

Now the Sydney Opera House is safe.

3 thoughts on “Week 18: He is sorry By Marc”

  1. I really enjoyed your story Marc. Well done!
    It’s good to stand on your own two feet and do what is right even though others might be laughing at you.

  2. I liked the beginning of the story but the end kind of confused me. I don’t know what you meant when you said an abominable that was the size of a mammoth. Otherwise it was alright.

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