Week 18 My Holiday In Sydney By Danny

In 2017 my family and I went to Sydney on our holidays for two whole weeks. When we arrived in Sydney we went to our hotel, booked in and went straight to sleep as the journey had taken us an astonishing 23 hours.

One week later we had visited Sydney Opera House, Sydney F.C. home ground where they play, the beach and of course the pool in the hotel every day.

On the day we were going home we decided to go and see the twelve statues across from Sydney Opera House. When I went to take a picture of one … he put his hand on my shoulder.

AHHHHHHHHHH

5 thoughts on “Week 18 My Holiday In Sydney By Danny”

  1. I like how you had that scary ending where he put is hand on your shoulder. did you know the statues represent a chines army. maybe for next time you could finish the story off of the cliffhanger

  2. Great job! I love how you compared this colorful army to the Chinese Soldiers. I hope that you win! Keep up that great work of yours. I think you have an one hundred percent chance of winning!

  3. Hi Danny,
    I really liked the way you used the prompt and the ending of the story was really good.
    From Emmanuel ms brennocks class.

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