Week 18: Stone statues, Dan

One bright sunny day in my favourite game called MINECRAFT, I felt like going to Blocky Bill’s restaurant.

As I walked out the door I saw a  flying bow. I ignored it because  I thought I had seen it before. What I did not know was that an evil mastermind was holding the bow.

I walked out onto the street and bumped into my neighbours Steve and Alex. We all decided to go to Bills together. As we walked into the restaurant an arrow landed on the ground.

CRACKLE!!  Everything turned to stone … including us.

 

3 thoughts on “Week 18: Stone statues, Dan”

  1. Hello Dan,

    I was impressed by the quality of your writing achieved in 96 words. It seemed the family in the prompt photo, with many others including you and your friends, had fallen victim to the plans of an evil mastermind.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. I really enjoyed your story this week – well done Dan.
    I love your Onomatopoeia!
    Hopefully, someone else in Minecraft will be able to come to your rescue!

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