Week 18 The slow journey By Adam

My family and I were on the way home from a long journey to Dublin. It was so boring but luckily I had my IPad to entertain me. As we left the city there was a vast traffic jam and big commotion. “We will get out soon” My Mom Said. “But it is so slow,” I replied. We were there for hours on end. We got out of the city but as we were going into the town nearest to our home there was a crash so we had to turn around and go the long way. The journey was supposed to take 3 hours but it took 7 hours.

3 thoughts on “Week 18 The slow journey By Adam”

  1. Hello Adam, it is so frustrating being stuck in traffic jams, especially if you are on the freeway, as there is no where to go. You just have to keep going to the next exit. Thank goodness for the iPad, but no so good for the driver.

  2. Hi Adam,
    Your story was very good! I like the way you used the prompt to make a story of you on a journey. What are you gonna make next? Hope to read more of your good stories!

    From, Leo

  3. Hi Adam,

    Your story is very entertaining. The way you used the prompt was very interesting. What is your favourite part of your story ? Keep up the good work.

    From Holly

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