Week 19: An Unexpected Storm By Benny

Finally, NO more school!

It was Saturday, the start of the weekend. I thought it would be a good idea to start off the day by going to the zoo. It wasn’t open. Although it was Saturday nothing was opened. I was confused. The town felt deserted. I saw people indoors which confused me since it was a sunny day. They looked at me like I was crazy.

Suddenly, heavy rain started pouring down and there was a strong wind. I forgot about the news! A storm was supposed to come. I tried to run home but the wind made it difficult.

By the time I was home, I was soaking. I wish I read the news.

One thought on “Week 19: An Unexpected Storm By Benny”

  1. Hi Benny, Isn’t it always the case that you go out in the sunshine only for the rain to lash it down! I like this plain story, one that everyone can relate to, and you have made an excellent job of telling it. I really like how the action is reflected in the short sharp sentences, a good structure and a creative piece. Well done.

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