Week 19: How we have changed By Liam

Walking through the green wonderland, a flurry of memories flashed by, all still vivid treasures. I was young, it’s been half a century since then. So much has changed, yet so little.

The human race was at its peak of innovation with science, technology, education etc. One dumb decision started a chain reaction of nuclear bombs. Practically all life on earth wiped out within a week. But, here is a haven of green, a mixture of natural life and human life.

Nowadays, we roam freely, no more phones or gadgets to distract us from the beauty of the world. People talk about how happy they are now. I think we have changed for the better.

8 thoughts on “Week 19: How we have changed By Liam”

  1. Hi Liam, great story.
    I hope you did change for the better.
    I wonder why did this kid decide to wipe out life.
    Keep up the good work.
    Shane C.

  2. Amazing story. It’s so captivating. Your adjectives were superb and your punctuation and grammar was on point. I don’t have one bad thing to say about it. What was that dumb decision? This story reminds me of an English comprehension I one did. Brilliant work. Well done.

  3. Hi Liam. Superb story this week! I really enjoyed reading it.
    *** Amazing paragraphing.
    ***Brilliant grammar.
    WISH: I have no wish for you as your story was incredible.
    ***Great adjectives.
    Fantastic story. Keep up the phenomenal work!
    P.S. If you get a chance could you please check out my story and tell me what you think at: http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-19/rebecca

    -Rebecca.

  4. Wow! I have no words. your story blew me away!
    Your adjectives were amazing! I also really liked how you got rid of technology and took notice to how beautiful the world actually is.
    I have no wish at all, great story
    Good luck, hope you win 🙂

    Also, if you have the time, it would be great if you could comment on my story, here’s the link 🙂
    http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-19/dearbhla

  5. I think that this is the best story I have read anywhere in all of January, Liam! Stunning writing and you paint a picture of the new world so well with your words. I *LOVE* the idea of a world with “no more phones or gadgets to distract us from the beauty of the world”. We take the beauty of our world for granted and you’ve summed that up perfectly in your story. WELL DONE! Keep up the amazing work 🙂

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