Week 19 : Fishing boat sale: By Kasparas

“Daaaaad! I DON’T want to go! ” I moaned through the whole conversation.

“Guess what? I will let you pick it yourself but don’t go crazy. ok? What do you think? “questions dad happily knowing that I will pick to go.

“Fine, I’ll go!”

I was going to pick out a fishing boat in the most stupid location at the woods.

At the end of the day  I would not say it was bad but actually quite enjoyable.

Kids don’t always trust your mind. Ok?

3 thoughts on “Week 19 : Fishing boat sale: By Kasparas”

  1. Well done, I really like your 100wc this week. I really enjoyed reading it.

    Star: Great punctuation.
    Star: I like the ending of your 100wc.
    Wish: At the start I didn’t really get what you meant by it (meaning the boats)
    Star: Good use of adjectives.
    Star: Really great heading.
    Question: Why didn’t you want to go?
    Link: I get when you don’t want to go somewhere, but when you do you enjoy it.

    Overall your story is really excellent, I am going to suggest it to my teacher. It would be great if you could get showcased in the coming week.
    It would be great if you could check out my 100wc.
    http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-19/sophie-g

    Keep it up.
    Sophie G

  2. It’s not just kids who need to not trust their own minds sometimes, Kasparas! Adults could use a little bit of that too. Sometimes we think that something will be awful before we even try it. It’s nice to be proven wrong and end up enjoying something like that! Well done and keep up the great work!

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