Week 19 The robot By Tadhg

I looked at my watch. “It’s time! It’s time” I exclaimed.

I ran to my room and grabbed it. It looked amazing with its dazzling light its inexplicable colour. I couldn’t believe it.  I had made my own robot. Even if it was tiny I still loved it.

As I went into the kitchen to wash my hands I left my robot outside.  When I was done I went to get my robot but it was dangling above me on the gutter. I rushed for a ladder but when I went out it wasn’t there. I looked everywhere and then I found it sliding down the drainpipe

I couldn’t believe it, it came down the drainpipe.

3 thoughts on “Week 19 The robot By Tadhg”

  1. Hi Tadhg,

    I really enjoyed reading your contribution this week. I loved the way you described your robot with the adjectives “dazzling” and “inexplicable.” I found your story very creative and I liked the way you thought of something that you’d never expect to come down a drainpipe!

    Well done 🙂

  2. I really enjoyed your story this week Tadhg – well done!
    I think that perhaps like in the poem “Robot Kid” your robot might need to be “unplugged from the power grid.”

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