Week 19: The Weird Man By:Robert

“Humans of Earth if you don’t stop destroying everything in your way that planet of yours will be destroyed. In Colorado, there is a man and he’s destroying everything he sees and he’s living in a weird boat hell. The policemen caught him and arrested him but next day he escaped I suppose by destroying the wall of the prison.

If you see him please call 997 and tell us where he is because if he destroys something else he will destroy our planet; it will explode so…”

“You did it, well done subject 2160.” said an alien to the human which was destroying everything.

4 thoughts on “Week 19: The Weird Man By:Robert”

  1. Hello Robert,

    As I started to read your story, I suspected an environmental terrorist was at work in Colorado. Reading to the end of your story, your twist made me realise perhaps the Colorado man might not be controlling his actions or is working to an alien plan. Is an alien invasion imminent? Well done!

    Your creative idea makes me wonder what would happen had the story continued. I suspect you have many such adventures so I hope you can continue entering the 100WC.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Well done Robert, great twist. I enjoyed your story. It was an original take on the prompt. Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock

  3. Robert, I never saw the ending of your story coming! It was so unexpected! I wonder why the aliens would want to send a human to destroy everything. Maybe they were planning an invasion? Superb writing Robert, well done!

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