WEEK 2 Jewels by Conor

One day my brother and I were walking down the street.

Then Donagh said,”Why are we waking down this street?”

I replied”I have to show you something.”

Then we arrived.”I saw this earlier” I said.

It was a pile of jewels.We started looking at all the jewels, and suddenly we saw a bomb. So we quickly put it in the dump.

That was close we thought

11 thoughts on “WEEK 2 Jewels by Conor”

  1. Hi Conor,

    When I first read this I thought that you had quickly put the bomb in the dump, I had to re-read It and realised you were saving the jewels. This could have been a very different story!

    Miss T
    Stockbridge school

  2. Hi Conor. I enjoyed your story. It was short and sweet but straight to the point. I really hope that bomb didn’t explode.

  3. I like the way the story shocked me that there was bomb on the pile of jewels and I hope you write more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  4. Wow, Conor, you were lucky that you realised it was a bomb and got away in time. I wonder what happened to all the jewels in the end? Did you go back to them and decide what to do? Keep up the good work!

    Mr. Russell
    Team 100

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