Week 2: So Many Confusions by Adam

One day it was very windy so I ran home. On the way home I went to the shop and I saw blood everywhere. So I ran home.

When I got home my parents were upstairs tied up. I untied them and asked them what happened?
They said it was a robber. So I went outside and saw a tiny man, a fallen flower pot and some beads.
Then I saw the robber. I was an undercover policeman. So I arrested him.

Then life was great.

18 thoughts on “Week 2: So Many Confusions by Adam”

  1. Goodness me, Adam, I was exhausted after reading this. There was so much action packed into just 100 words.

    I was also wondering how the prompt fitted into your story and was impressed that it slotted so seamlessly in at the end.

    Miss T
    Stockbridge school
    Hampshire

  2. Oh Adam I can’t imagine the fright you got when you discovered your parents tied up. I guess they got just as much of a fright! I’m glad you saved the day and life was good again.

  3. hi Adam,great story i liked the part were the robber was a tiny prison’
    I hope they caught the robber.

    from Tom

  4. I’m so glad that you caught the robber, Adam. You must be a very good detective. I’m also glad the no-one was hurt. Keep up the great writing!

    Mr. Russell
    Team 100
    Waterford

  5. I love the part were he went to the shop and so blood everywhere and ran home.
    Great story keep it up
    By Collins

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