Week 2 The Shrink Crystals by Ronan

I am just about to try a lab experiment with my two lab partners Jeff and Joe. I am going to try and make the world bigger by using glow gems also known as shrink crystals. But if they fall they could shrink anyone that touches them.

So that is why I am carrying them in this… oh no I have just dropped the
crystals and Jeff and Joe have just touched them.

Could this get any worse?

5 thoughts on “Week 2 The Shrink Crystals by Ronan”

  1. Well done Ronan, you’ve done a great job with the prompt this week. I like how you described carrying the crystals! I’d love to read what happened next! Poor Jeff and Joe.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hi Ronan

    I love the way you ended this on a question. I could imagine the feeling of exasperation in your voice as you wrote it! It does sound like a disaster ours day.

    Miss T
    Stockbridge school

  3. I feel so sorry for Jeff and Joe that the shrinked,great job on your story I hope you do more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

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