Week 2 ; The sweet shop by Matthew D

One day my friend Zac and I were on our way to a sweet shop. When we finally got there the owner was lying on the ground. His hand was covered in blood. He had dropped a glass onto it.

My friend and I helped him up. We got a first aid kit and bandaged up the man’s hand . Afterwards, the man gave us a packet of bom boms each . That night I went to sleep happy.  The next morning on the front cover of the newspaper I saw my friend Zac and I.

10 thoughts on “Week 2 ; The sweet shop by Matthew D”

  1. Hi Matthew,

    This is Yousef and I would like to say, I love your story. When I read this story I think the theme is always help others, or what goes around comes. The detail in this story is also good. You did a very good job and the story ends happy. Nice job!

    Sincerely,
    Yousef

  2. Hey Matthew, how’s it going up there in New Zealand? I thought it was funny how you made the papers, it gave the story a funny touch. I once got cut with glass too, so I can relate to the shopkeeper. I think you should work on your punctuation (like commas) a little bit.
    From Zara in Illinois, U.S.

  3. Hi Matthew

    What a great story, with a happy ending. I haven’t read many of those this week! What I liked most about this story is that it really could have been a true story and this really could have happened to you.

    Miss T
    Stockbridge school

  4. I love the part where you and your friend got on the newspaper great story. Hope you keep writing like this.

    -Ben Q

  5. I always love to read a story where someone has done a good deed. And this story made my day, Matthew! I bet that the shopkeeper was very grateful to you and your friend. It was very nice of him to give you some sweets too. And how cool that you made the newspaper! Keep up the good work!

    Mr. Russell (Team 100)
    Waterford.

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