Week 2 The Flood of Beads By Szymon

One day a boy called Luke and his friend were going to visit his uncle. His uncle is a mad scientist and he rang to tell Luke that he had invented a new potion. After an hour of walking, they were finally there.

Handing them the potion he carelessly dropped it and started panicking. After explaining to them that the potion created a flood of beads – the liquid had turned into beads already. Eventually they saw that the floor outside was covered in beads. The lab was barricaded but they saw the flood coming. After a minute of watching the flood they were fully covered with beads.

What would they do?

8 thoughts on “Week 2 The Flood of Beads By Szymon”

  1. This story has it all, a mad scientist and everything that comes with that. When you out a character like that in your stories you really can go anywhere crazy!

    Be proud of your word choices, they are superb. I particularly liked the used of the word ‘barricaded’

    Miss T
    Stockbridge school

  2. Hi Szymon. Well done. Your story is really in keeping with the picture prompt and you’ve done a great job. Laboratories and mad Scientists are always a great combination for a good story. I really hope they were able to stop the flood of beads or else the boys were in big trouble.

  3. I like the way you put the big bang at the middle of the story.Good job and I hope you write more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  4. Well done Szymon. I I liked the part were luke’s uncle was a MAD SCIENTIST!!!!!
    Great story Szymon.

    from TOM

  5. Well done Syzmon.
    I hope Luke’s uncle might have an antidote – a potion that will reverse the first potion.
    If not, Luke and his friend are in big trouble…
    Good work this week.

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