Week 2 The Tower by Aidan

“I can’t wait to go on the tower -it’s the tallest ride in the theme park,” said Tom as they waited in the queue.

“I can’t wait either –  it is going to be so much fun”.

When it was our turn we walked on to the platform and got in our seats. Tom was a bit scared so I told him that the ride is completely robust. It started to go up and I let out a squeal of excitement.

Then it started spinning and everyone below was looking up. We were shooting up like a rocket until we got to the top. I was so happy that I didn’t notice the loose screw… Then everything stopped and screams were heard below us as we fell…

2 thoughts on “Week 2 The Tower by Aidan”

  1. Hi Aiden dash well done on completing your 100 word story this week. You’ve used some great words in your writing for example, robust. What a brilliant word to use! But I have to say I’m not a big fan of rollercoasters because they frighten me – and after reading your story I don’t think I’ll be getting on one anytime soon! Well done and keep up the great work!

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