“I can’t wait to go on the tower -it’s the tallest ride in the theme park,” said Tom as they waited in the queue.
“I can’t wait either – it is going to be so much fun”.
When it was our turn we walked on to the platform and got in our seats. Tom was a bit scared so I told him that the ride is completely robust. It started to go up and I let out a squeal of excitement.
Then it started spinning and everyone below was looking up. We were shooting up like a rocket until we got to the top. I was so happy that I didn’t notice the loose screw… Then everything stopped and screams were heard below us as we fell…
Hi Aidan,
It is Bartosz from St Molagas
Loved your story keep up the great work.
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Hi Aiden dash well done on completing your 100 word story this week. You’ve used some great words in your writing for example, robust. What a brilliant word to use! But I have to say I’m not a big fan of rollercoasters because they frighten me – and after reading your story I don’t think I’ll be getting on one anytime soon! Well done and keep up the great work!