Week 2 The Tiny Umpa Lumpas By Christopher

I woke up hearing my friends whispering by the window.

“What are you looking at?”, I asked as they turned around in fright.

They didn’t say anything but Alan pulled me over and whispered,                  “Why don’t you have a look?”

I opened my mouth with amazement as I saw tiny people climbing up on each other looking into bedroom windows. I wondered what were they doing?

I shouted, “What are you doing?”

They all then fell down off the man-made tower and they started running towards us. They were just about to speak but then I  … woke up. It was all just a dream.



4 thoughts on “Week 2 The Tiny Umpa Lumpas By Christopher”

  1. I always found the oompa loompas kind of funny – but they sound a little scary in your story, Christopher! It’s a shame it was all a dream as I’d love to know what happened next! Keep up the great work!

  2. Hello Christopher i really enjoyed reading your story it reminds me of the Umpa lumpas in Charle and the Choclate factory were you freaked out after that? Sincerely julius

  3. I enjoyed reading your story Christopher – It made me laugh! Well done.
    I felt really sorry for the Oompa Loompas. You must have given them an awful fright when you shouted at them.
    I was a bit disappointed to find out it was only a dream.
    Keep up the good work.

  4. Hi Christopher, This reminds me a little bit of a story I used to read as a very young child called ‘The Elves and the Shoemaker’… These tiny elves used to come along at night and mend all the shoes that the shoemaker couldn’t get to mend during the day as he was getting old and couldn’t work as fast. I really enjoyed your story. I wasn’t expecting it to be a dream!!!

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