Week 20 By Kris

As it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. Was It a space ship or a satellite? I wondered.  But then my friend shouted Meteorite.

We ran to the underground part of the park. We were so terrified of what we saw we didn’t even look out. But when we eventually peaked out we saw that it was still coming at speed.

We ran home and I told my mother. She said she heard on the radio that it would be in the sky for a long time. Then I said to myself how will I juggle all my sports with a meteorite in the sky.

4 thoughts on “Week 20 By Kris”

  1. Hi Kris
    Using the prompt in the beginning of your 100WC is a wonderful way to get the reader engaged in your writing. You then did a great job of building up the story. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100W)
    Wellington, New Zealand

  2. Hello Kris,
    Your story was very interesting. I loved the way you used the prompt at the beginning. Your story was very well put together. It reminded me of a time when my friend thought he saw a UFO in the sky. What was the friends name? Keep up the good work.

    Holly ~ Ms Brennock’s Class

  3. Hi, Kris

    I really liked your story.

    My favourite part was when you used a word of the day

    It reminded me of when my friend saw a meteor shower.

    From, Mia

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