Week 20: The Concord By Dan


Wa hooo! Up we went high above the clouds.

Suddenly I heard glass breaking and alarms ringing. l was piloting the Concorde.

“This is great,” I thought.

I’m above cloud level so I can push the top speed button.

“Whoosh!!” I said as I sped across the Atlantic Ocean.

I was going at 600km an hour. Immediately  I heard a beeping sound and it was coming from the plane.

“I think we’re going to crash,” I roared. “Prepare for impact,” I shouted .

The nose was pointed down…CRASH…

Two hooks hitched onto the plane.

“Who saved us ?”  I wondered

3 thoughts on “Week 20: The Concord By Dan”

  1. Hi Dan
    I think my heart almost stopped as I was reading this! From the sound of the alarms and breaking glass right through the shouts of ‘prepare for impact’ I think you have captured my worst fear. It was such a relief that you were saved at the very end, although the mystery around the saviour made me wonder of there may be more twists and turns to come.
    Miss T
    Stockbridge, Hampshire

  2. It sounds like you are a bit of a daredevil! I hope you weren’t putting anyone else’s lives at risk?
    I really didn’t expect the twist at the end.
    I wonder what’s happening here?
    Have you been rescued?…or ambushed?
    Super work – well done!

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