Week 20 The Crash By Matthew D

“I’ve won.” I had just won a competition to go to space. I couldn’t believe it.

A couple of days later I was in the rocket. I was nervous but I was also excited. We were moving  very fast when we left the earth’s atmosphere.

Suddenly we hit a meteoroid and we had to jump into a space module. We landed and we were cold and hungry. I had a flare so  I sent it into the air and a couple of moments later a helicopter had come to save us.

The first thing I did when I got back was make an oath to never fly again. That journey was inexplicable.

4 thoughts on “Week 20 The Crash By Matthew D”

  1. A great story Matthew. It’s full of excitement and wonderful vocabulary. I’m not a bit surprised you took an oath never to fly again. I think I’d do the same!

  2. Well done Matthew. Your work is very well written and descriptive. I especially liked the part about the meteoroid.

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