Week 21 The master’s poison! BY CONOR

Today I was out in the forest and saw people doing taekwondo. I was wondering if it was a trap because the person who was leading them was doing really weird moves and did not know what he was doing.

For a second he paused and rummaged in his bag. He took something out of his bag that looked like a bottle with a poison in it. Everyone screamed. AAAHHH!!!!!!

He poured it over everyone and they all turned to wood!

WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN?

5 thoughts on “Week 21 The master’s poison! BY CONOR”

  1. Well done Conor. There was definitely something strange going on! I wonder what it was. I like the word ‘rummaged’ that you used. It’s a great description of what people do when they are trying to find things in their bag!
    Great work.
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hi Conor, I really liked your story. You really put lots of effort on this story. This story is very interesting. Well done!

    My class blog is msbrennocksclass.100wc.net

  3. Hi Conor
    Your question matched my thoughts, what WAS happening? The use of poison to turn everyone to wood was a shock to read. Hopefully there wasn’t anything more sinister about to happen.
    Miss T
    Stockbridge, Hampshire

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